Representation feedback -
you have made a good start with this blog post Kieran. There is some interesting detail thinking not just about representation, but also moving into semiotics and audience reception.
However I think some of your text is taken from a web site, can you ensure that you credit where this is from in order to avoid any confusion and make it clear that you are doing this. You should then discuss the text that you have copied and pasted in relation to your own film.
The comment on the representation in your own film is much too short, this needs to be detailed and considered about all of the characters in your film.
At the moment this work is at a level2/3 border.
Titles and Logo's feedback -
Again a good start - I would just like to know if you are going to use any of these as influences in your own work and why? Are they typical for your genre etc.
what is off the website i quoted but i will put it in brackets to make it a little more obvious.
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