Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have made great strides since your last feedback Kieran, I am pleased to see a greater array of analysis from three of the genres. The work itself is detailed in places, and you have clearly noticed many of the conventions of the genre. You have a tendency to try and describe a little to much though, but make good use of media language. At the moment the work looks a little unstructured, large blocks of writing with no images, subheadings etc to make the reading of the blog more interesting. the work is at a level 2/3 border and in order to improve I would like you to: 

• Ensure you have at least one Rom Com analysis
• Add images and embed the opening of the film in EACH analysis.
• Comment on the effect on the audience as well as discussing which elements are conventions of the genre.
• Write your Prelim Task evaluation - This should have been finished some weeks ago.