You have clearly been working hard on your blog Kieran, ensuring that you are blogging your progress throughout the production of your film opening. You have evidenced that you planned the film well and you especially thought through the mise-en-scene throughout.
The last piece of work is very informal, and in order for this to make up part of your evaluation you need to consider many other elements, including the target audience reception (include theories) and representation as well as all of the other areas we have discussed in lessons snce September. Try to avoid 'proving' that your film opening is good, but discuss the good and bad points in relation to the evaluation questions.
I would ike to see you tackle some more creative approaches to the evaluation including vlog entries, presentations, print (leaflet etc) green-screen directors commentaries etc.
I would also like to see a little more care taken with presentation, for example I is always a capital letter etc.
